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Heartbeat

Reviewed by Tom Randall


I really wish I could say nice things about this book.  I really want to write a good review, but I can’t. 

I think this is such a shame to say this about such an inventive and innovative book but I have my reasons.  Heartbeat is a very interesting book in that the narrative is run through the medium of short poems making up the chapters.  The story itself is about a girl called Annie and her love for running.  Her friend Max and she love running everyday, leading very happy, peaceful lives.  That is the basic story.  That is, in fact most of the story.  I know I may be being incredibly critical, but it is very difficult to find some of the points to some of the stories in the novel.  For example, Annie’s grandpa forgets how to make fried chicken and Annie’s mother asks why, because he made fried chicken every day.  That’s where that story ends.  It doesn’t appear again in the story, no mentions of it again.  I saw this as a symptom of Grandpa’s age and his tendency to forget things, but for most people, it seems quite odd and random.  This happens a lot during the story, with lots of loose ends. 

Unfortunately, another bad point, I think the use of language in this book is extremely limited and childish, and though it may be aimed at younger readers, I’m sure the majority of my age will agree with me.

All in all, I do not like this book.  At all.  The only thing I like about it is the very interesting idea of having poems to tell the story.  Still, it isn’t a good novel, taking me only three-quarters of an hour to read.

Personally, I don’t know how this book got into the shortlist.